The test works for most of canons.
If your answer to the following questions is "YES" add yourself the points.
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
no
2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
no
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
no
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
no
5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
no
6. Your character's past is: a) Tragic, treumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0
tragic, treumatic
7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
no
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
no?
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
yea
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
YEs
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
probably
12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
yes
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
robot legs, robot arm, robot eye (3 points)
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
no
15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3 I may think of more questions later.
nope
TOTAL: 0-10 You'd rather travel to the moon and back again than create a Mary Sue on purpose 11-20 Your OC is an interesting character with no overdose 21-30 Your OC is acceptable, but maybe you could fix some things 31-40+ Too bad. You created a Mary Sue, face it.
MARY SUE TEST Is you OC a Mary Sue? (CHESSON)
The test works for most of canons.
If your answer to the following questions is "YES" add yourself the points.
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
no
2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
yes
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
no
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
no
5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
no
6. Your character's past is: a) Tragic, treumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0
tragic, treumatic
7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
no
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
no?
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
yea
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
Yup
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
probably
12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
no
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
metal plate on his face (one point)
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
no
15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3 I may think of more questions later.
nope
TOTAL: 0-10 You'd rather travel to the moon and back again than create a Mary Sue on purpose 11-20 Your OC is an interesting character with no overdose 21-30 Your OC is acceptable, but maybe you could fix some things 31-40+ Too bad. You created a Mary Sue, face it.
15 points for chesson